The music is really good until 1:07, somehow you managed to have a super interesting and serious verse and then fall into a comedic chorus, personally i would have liked to see the song proceed the more serious style and have a catchy intense Chorus, i think the verse deserves that.
That verse has sometimes too much lyric for the song (noticeable in " whether or not you would?" or "of an Austrian-born", not something very important though since its barely noticeable.
The lyrics themselves are very good and smart in the verse, and vocals are above average in all the song specially in the final section.
The structure i kinda identify myself with it, im the same way doing my songs, all different parts and not much structure xD But since this sounds more of a flash or movie song than a normal song i guess you cant be criticized by that.
The rap part is well done and fits pretty well, its pretty good both instrumentally and vocally and the buildup starting at 02:32 is a nicely done.
The last part is really awesome and explores your vocals in a really tasty way.
So....overall i love the verse and the final section and i think the song would benefit greatly by having a second verse related to the first instead of rap and more serious lyrics in the chorus.
Love the vocals, love the instrumental and the mix is really good.
Awesome job Ulfus!