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[Kid Across The Street]

I must say the initial impression was not the best, the animation was too simple but i think you struck me with the South Park effect, this was actually a really smart video!! :D
Love the script, the voice acting and the animation ends up complementing the rest pretty well!
Nicely done Brewstew!! :D

brewstew responds:

Thanks man

[OsoPerro I]

It makes no sense whatsoever but the animation is pretty well done! :)
Nice work JukinS, just work more on the script :P

JukinS responds:

Thank you, your reviews help me to improve! im so grateful!

[Intro]

Fun with nice animation and music :)

[Lucahjin - Deku Hijinks]

For a first video this is pretty cool!
The animation is not bad or the drawing, the script was a bit boring.
Nice work FanFlurre :)

FanFlurre responds:

Thank you so much! The audio is taken from an episode Lucahjins Let's Play of OoT, so to make it more interesting seemed difficult. :)

[A Girl In A Room Collab]

When i saw you guys were doing something like this i was very excited!
You delivered with some scary stuff, love the first animation and the second was really scary, if only the girl would have been more "lovable" it would have been perfect.
Awesome!

ReklessCreati0n responds:

I'll definitly work on making her more loveable in the next one.

[shades of madness: traile]

Here is the promised review for fanning me :)
So, the first thing that really bothers me in this movie is how the audio is completely ignored, the musics fit pretty well in the genre but then they sound really low quality (maybe a render option you chose wrong?) and that really ruins a video for me, you should try to look into it :)
The second part that bothers me in the regards of the audio in how there are no sound effects at all, no gun shooting or sword swoosh, those kind of kinds. They would bring another live to your movie.
The art seems acceptable and although it does not have a lot of detail into it works pretty well.
The animation however is most of the times forced and unnatural and does make the movie confusing at points.
The idea seems pretty good, a dude that wants to kill the main Madness dude would be a perfect subject for a bloody movie.

-Overall this is not a bad movie, you obviously like to make movies and have passion for this art, you must however pay attention to the little details such as making a more detailed art, thinking the fights a little further, not cutting the audios quality at all and above all adding sound effects!
Cheers and good luck in the future chris-the-stick2!

chris-the-stick responds:

ok, first of all, the music was good, or it was too silent? what should i do with it? whats a render, btw?
second, i agree, there are no sound effects in this, and i should add some, but due to lack of time and from other issues, i had to submit it as it is.
i will add some in the next madness film(actual episode)

lastly, yes i drew everything in this movie except from the guns/fists in the first part of the trailer. in the second part tho, i did everything. even the fists/guns.

also, the story is funny, and cool, and the trailer seems confusing, but that happens, because i added many different parts from many different episodes of my series. so, it can get a bit confusing.

thanks for your great advice, and for your good review, i will try to improve in my next parts, so thanks alot!

[Valbrook:Load'em&Leave'em]

I like the video, good animation and voice over the only thing that really bums me and probably others that use headphones is the sound clipping or something, it gets really anoying.
Also the "main theme" could be recorded with better audio quality.
Good Work on the animation though!

insertnamehere85 responds:

I am honestly not good at many things and audio is one of them. I will try to fix some of that clipping in the next one. You are right about the theme too. Thanks!